How To Snowboard
Pack it up (the bags)
Pack it in (the car)
Drive on up (the pass)
Drive on in (the lot)
Pack it out (the equipment)
Trek it up (the walkway)
Bind it up (the board)
Take it up (the lift)
Slide off (the chair)
Strap in (the boot)
Ride on down (the mountain)
Jump off (the jumps)
Slide on (the rails)
Make it to the bottom
And do it again!
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This poem is impressive! I am struck by your use of the words within parantheses-- it looks like a "call-and-response" feature as if you are inviting the reader to be your team-mate-- as if you were on a rowing crew or any sport requiring co-ordination.
I think the last line should have been in parantheses, though, for the sake of consistency.
I don't think I have ever seen a poem like that before, but I really liked it. It was an interesting effect; having the parantheses.
The parantheses add a very unique and interesting structure which I like.
The parantheses were a nice touch. This poem makes me want to go boarding right now.
This poem makes me want to go snowbaording. I never have so it sounds like alot of fun.
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